The clouds are darkening.
Peacocks are not around,
to spread their wings, to dance.
Songs of the birds, inaudible,
to the mind-full beings.
Blossomed flowers!
Noise of the buzzing bees, unheard.
Dark sky.
Sprinkles of light drops,
electri-pity, darkens!
All alone.
They are!
And, so, is this slave.
8 reflections:
If you have seen inside you,you are never alone.
Thatha, you've simply not got what this slave meant! If, U had looked inside, you'd have realized that you're always alone. And, loneliness, too, is a great celebration :-)
Moreover, the poem is, also, about mind-full people, who don't appreciate the small things of life :-)
Shree Rama Jayam!
Nice one Mani!!
@Whirlwind
Thank you Swetha akka, for liking it :-)
Glad 2 have ur comments here, too.
Jai Shri Ram!
Nowadays too many people are too busy to notice anything in life. This is something sad.:(
Very True akka :-) Am really glad that u got the essence of the poem! Thank You.
Take Care.....
Shree Rama Jayam!
In the rat race of life- a race which keeps getting more tougher as one progresses- people get disjointed from the small things which provide the real happiness in life.:)
Loved reading it.
Am glad, Sneha :-)
Shri Rama Jayam!
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